1. Jeff Bacot

    Yes, let’s take the story underground. I have a feeling this Zoe chick is going to be a key part of the story later. “Hoarders” addition is good. And,”…the smell of raw, upturned earth replaced the stench of fried electronics and singed flesh.” Jarring imagery, very nice. Well done, Jen. Enjoying the subterranean plot twist.

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