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  1. Bryan, We had a fantastic start to this story, so vivid and full of tension right from the beginning. You are so talented and I can’t wait for the next round and really hope you can participate in that one too.
    Susie
    PS. To your question, I was listening to Fall Out Boys “Light ‘Em Up”. Perfect all-out-shit-storm chaos-run-crazy music 🙂

  2. I loved every moment of it, Bryan! You started an awesome thing. I am also so proud to work with such a talented group of writers! It was fun to add my twist and prospective to it, as well. I truly looked forward to each post to see where the story would go next. Can’t wait to do this again!

  3. I totally agree with Susie and Chrissy. It was so much fun reading everyone’s takes and seeing how our individual styles came together to weave the plot. With every person I had “ah-ha!” moments where their movement of the characters and introduction of new ideas that never occurred to me but made so much sense. The idea you had is really awesome and I hope you pick it back up and flush it out because it would make fantastic book!

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